[Adamrosso]

This pain, this pain, deep inside my vain.
I can't do anything, i can't restrain, restrain the pain, deep inside my vain.
I'm sitting here, helpless, thoughtless, in my room.
Sitting in this room, this room of doom.
Crying, crying, basicly dying.
I wish i could save myself, i wish i could save myself.
I wish i could restrain myself, restrain myself from doing this.
I try to ignore, ignore, ignore the voices.
Ignore the voices, inside my head, but do i have the choises?
So, i try to reach paradise, my luck is in these dices.
But this pain, this pain, deep inside my vain, keeps coming in large pieces, large portions. So please, save me, me, and give me the key.
Give me the key, the key, the key to be free.
Lord please, so many people, dying, dying for no reason.
All these people, dyin' for no reason. Yeah, it's sad, so very sad.
I can't do anything to help, can't do anything to help, i feel so bad.
So lord, cure this pain, this pain, deep inside my vain.
I see the light, the light, it's so bright.
The light, the light, telling me not to fight.
Not to fight, myself, myself, i must not fight.
So here i sit in this room, this room of doom.
Crying, crying, basicly dying.
The pain, is too much, it's too frightening
So, i die, die, die, die in my room, my room of doom.
But, what, what, what happend?
I wake up, did that just really happen?
I walk out my room, my room of doom, and see the brightness.
The brightness of outside, the brightness of the world, the world of happiness. I'm out of the room, the room of doom, away from the crappyness. The pain, the pain deep inside my vain..has gone down the drain.
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So, what'cha think. It's almost 2000 characters big. I wrote it for a contest of this anime forum. Comment & Rate pls!

[//Aneurysm\\]

I suck at poems, but this is intriging, dark, gruesom, just how I like it

[Adamrosso]

Thanks, i might start doing this more often now.